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Anthony313
Niveau 2
04 mai 2010 à 19:42:22

Voila c'est mon premier frestyle style Eminem ques que vous en pensez ? merci de vos réponses
Then you follow me you follow me

OK let us return 10 years behind
Why all this creation, because everybody waits for it
Everything that I want it is to clear me a road and to be able to arrive at the top 50
Hey yes it is my philosopher
OK I was HEY
But to continue it is not your whore of word?
YOU told me to follow you or you be going to show you?
All that I make it is to respect 3 R
Thus I have to continue and not let of the meth stop me
Guy calls his its hip-hop
And call I hip-hop
If only there was only quite his and anything of quite his
You can always say to me that I am on the ground
But what can you say when I shall be at the top
And if I have to annoy the world I would annoy this world
And I shall spit at the shit and I would piss on quite his
1.000.000 $ the American dream I just ask it can arrive has to have my studio
And I promises not to return has this promise
Em ', the public say to me fan I am much more and I not would never be afraid of it
Go now try to save myself from my madness but as slim shady I would put back mas life in game has every opportunity
Then I do not look like has a god?
No I am not a god
But when I see all this shit of French rap to send tempts his to me everything trailed round
Then everybody, I am here for you and to be you for me!
Then what?
Then I?
I ask you to walk just on my steps to hang on you
And you can try to fall down
But the rap eminem king of will show you that only relapse is rots
And that even has Christmas I would sell quite his(her,its) easily and I shall walk
And if I cannot well, er his( will stop
And then breaks me not testicles you know him that quite this shit
Is not just..it
Let us return has this just time for everybody
Stick you
Stick you
Stick you
Hang on follow I
And all will follow That’s my decision to return squeaky clean but I could return in about years and mess what you say to me
But not I am and I shall stay until that my success reaches that of the MMLP his go too fast? so his goes improved
Sadden
But now it is necessary to take out from this whore of cage if we want to be able to bulge in the evening.
Well it is my decision
If only I had a weapon filled with quite its ammunition
He would be easier
It is what ?
Ah it is the end of my freestyle

Anthony313
Niveau 2
04 mai 2010 à 19:52:00

Vous n'aimez pas sa'?

saphyrsonic
Niveau 10
04 mai 2010 à 19:52:29

Je ne comprend pas l'anglais mais gg quand même :hap:
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Si vous parvenez à lire ceci, alors votre niveau intellectuel est dans les normes :hap:

Anthony313
Niveau 2
05 mai 2010 à 17:33:23

Merci et au fait j'ai 16 ans c'est juste que je prend un ancien pseudo de mon grand frère

Sunnix
Niveau 10
06 juillet 2010 à 01:20:39

Salut, j'sais pas si tu verras ca encore mais, je trouves ca vraiment géniale. T'as fait ca comment ? t'as tout ecris en francais puis traduit ?.

Hapolicier
Niveau 10
06 juillet 2010 à 01:22:06

ON VEUT LE VOCAROO ! ON VEUT LE VOCAROO :bave:

CrazyDark
Niveau 10
06 juillet 2010 à 01:25:45

Voca' :bave:

Foosball
Niveau 10
06 juillet 2010 à 01:26:31

Foosball vient de voir une bonnasse faire son jogging passer en face de la fenêtre :bave:

Ivebeen
Niveau 10
06 juillet 2010 à 01:27:02

Y a pas de rimes dans ton truc :hap:

Pseudo supprimé
Niveau 8
06 juillet 2010 à 01:27:04

Go Voca :hap:

CrazyDark
Niveau 10
06 juillet 2010 à 01:28:17

CrazyDark dit a Foosball qu'il a presque de la chance. :noel:

[XXXIV]bOu
Niveau 7
06 juillet 2010 à 01:28:24

commence par apprendre l'anglais je dirais

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